Year 3 Up-level Instructions

Today, Scotland Class worked together to up-level a boring set of instructions on, 'How to Capture a Dragon'. 

They were so proud of their work, they begged their teacher to put it on the blog so their parents could see!

Danni reported, "We used 2A sentences to improve Gertrude's original work".

Harry stated, "I used a thesaurus to find more interesting adjectives".

Here is their up-levelled instructions below (all the coloured words are the words they have

improved).

1. Firstly, arm yourself with your razor-sharp sword and fire-proof shield.

2. Secondly approach the brutal beast’s enigmatic lair and place your fire-proof cage above its deep, dark entrance.

3. After that, abandon the juicy, mouth-watering meat just underneath the cage so that he is tempted to come outside and devour it.
4. Next, patiently wait for the dragon to emerge and start gobbling the appetising, squidgy meat
5. Then, as soon as the dragon has started his meal, rapidly plunge the enclosure over him.
6. With caution, embark on the colossal cage and attach your padlock securely so that the dragon cannot escape.
7. Finally, perform a celebratory dance as you have successfully caught the ferocious fiend!

Let us know what you think in the comments!