Italy Class's Star Writers!

Children in Italy Class have been working especially hard over the last week writing their own episode as a spin off to 'Sugarcane Juice', by Pratima Mitchell.

Our goals were:
1. To set a story on a bus, which is vividly described using similes and metaphors.
2. To use powerful verbs to describe the actions.
3. To include dialogue that creates atmosphere and tension.
4. To correctly use pronouns to avoid repetition.
5. To use direct speech, which is set out and punctuated correctly.

All of the episodes were dangerous and exciting but two episodes were particularly impressive.
So... this week's star writers are Jayden and Kamile. Well done!

Have a read of their fantastic episodes below and see if you can spot where they have met the goals.

Jayden, Italy Class (Year 4)

Kamile, Italy Class (Year 4)